My family and I moved, we all had to pack and carry boxes, most of mine where light. But I had one more box to put in the truck but it wasn’t like the rest of the boxes I put in the truck. It was covered in grey glitter and it was heavy! I mean a dinosaur couldn’t carry it would go splat on the dinosaur! I asked my mum what could it be? She thought it might have been medals I won. I opened it up.. it was a blanket! I guess I’m really weak..
I love how you introduced a dinosaur into your story. I could imagine how heavy the box was if even a dinosaur couldn’t lift it.
Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Leilani. I loved your description of how heavy the box was by saying ‘a dinosaur couldn’t carry it’, and the twist that the box held only a blanket. To improve your writing, I suggest that you re-read, and edit, your text before publishing (or ask a friend to help you). 😊