I have a bike, its new fresh and my favourite colour yellow. Now tell me who doesn’t like yellow? It’s a bright beautiful colour and it gives me warm feelings! But my sister hates it, like I mean shes crazy and no longer is my sister, because she doesn’t like yellow! She tells me “ why do you ride that gross colour everywhere like you could’ve chosen mint or any other colour?!’ I say “ I hate any other colour but yellow”. She sighs and goes to the kitchen. I won the fight! She now has to like yellow!
You are very good at writing why you like the color yellow. My favorite color is purple. This is my blog if you want to look at it.
https://rosab21.edublogs.org/
Hello rosab21duntroon! Thank you! I like the colour yellow because it reminds me of life and happiness! Have a nice day! 😁
Leilani,
We liked how you handled this prompt in a way very different from others because you made it more about the color than about the bike. We liked how crafty your writing is to not just TELL, but the dialog helped SHOW the characters’ emotions.
Keep writing.
Mrs. G., and Garrett, Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA
Thank you so much! 😆😄
Hi Leilani,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
The Battle of the Colours! I quite like yellow too!
Good work this week.
Keep writing.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
https://blog.seesaw.me/mrsboyce/#!/
Thank you! 😃🤩